For my portfolio I choose to revise my argument essay.
Strengths:
- Involvement of idffrent point of views
- Effective ideas related to the thesis
- Effective thesis
Weaknesses:
- Grammar mistakes
- Need to be more focused and concise
- ideas should have been connected to each other to help the reader
To effectively revise my essay, I m going to more focus to smooth my essay by connecting the ideas to each other. I will also make sure that I will related my ideas to the thesis as well. I will read each paragraph out loud so that I can figure out my grammar mistakes. I will also make sure that I won't go off topic or I will my best to not become more broad while writing.
I will also make sure that my ideas wouldn't confuse my audience and I would try to bring my readers or audiences attention to the argument so that they wont question my paper or argument. I will also make sure that my evidence is arguable and related to the thesis and my topic so that I can provide better knowledge of my argument to the reader.
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