Thesis: Even though bullying in high school is one of the most common issues in today's society, it should become a major concern for teens in order to decrease the rate of suicides in teenagers.

My most compelling evidence is an example of a classmate, Jeremy Walzack, who recently committed suicide because there were lots of students use to bully him because of his mental disorders and failures in his classes. No one noticed the symptoms of suicide because his friends thought that he probably had a break up with his girl friend. But, then they found out that he was getting bullied by people who were claiming that he is not cool. It's logical that if you have seen bullying in recent that means it's usual and important to prevent.

My weakest evidence is my claim that if students find out the symptoms of suicides in their friends and classmates then they can tell someone adult or teachers so that they can hire a social adviser to help their friend. So that's why I m arguing that it should become a major concern and teens should take it seriously by helping their friends. Moreover, teens also can understand that bullying is a crime and they can get punish for it as well so that they should bully someone and play with their feelings.