As a look at my first blog post, I do feel like it's improving by time. I kind of feel like I am reaching for my goals  that I made on the first day of the class. Even my essays are getting more descriptive and looks like college essays now. Thank you so much miss Spencer for giving me feed backs on my papers. They were so helpful!


Yeah, this class actually helped me as a writer because now I know how does my ideas show go with the flow of essays which my tutor taught me!!:) (Miss.Young) 


Yes, I feel like the class is kind of quiet and we should do more activities to make it fun. For example, when we went over coma splice and those stuff, we used some sentences for exercises and we all were so eager to find out the mistakes in those sentences.It was so much fun and it actually took all of us intention.


Yes, my writing has been changed a little because now my essays as I said are more descriptive and in MLA format with correction and wordy a little than before, So I guess it's a positive improvement in my writing but hopefully it will become more furnished by the end of the semester. 


On the scale of 1 to 5, I would say my writing has improved 2 to 3 but hopefully I will get better by time!