• My final paper looks much better and descriptive than my rough draft. I corrected most of my errors and it's seems more organized than before. My rough draft had a lot of mistakes since I just put all the steps that I followed to get success; however, the steps weren't descriptive and organized like now. 
• Yes, I did major changes in my paper such as fragments, organization, description, etc. I also changed my grammar mistakes.

• Yes, after peer review and retyping the paper, I realized my mistake that I made during my rough draft. But some errors were just fragments so the power point that we went through in class helped me, too.
• Peer review and rereading my paper caused the changes that I made in my paper. Peer review actually helped me to see my partners' point of view which was kind of different than mine.
• Aspects of my essay: Strongest aspects of my essay was that I mentioned my all the steps that I went through and all the hardships that I faced during my journey from ESL to AP classes.
• My writing Process:

1. Type a rough draft of everything that comes out of your mind according to the subject.
2. Brainstorming on it. and add stuff on rough draft.
3. Check grammar mistakes.
4. Peer Review.
5. Corrections.
6. rereading essay out load to see if it makes sense or not.
7. final draft.

Done!!!:)